Pokemon Yin Yang War

[Nick]

Ok heres a fan fiction about teams who consist of evil and good. If one of the other get stronger or weaker in strength then the other then balance of the world shall be destroyed. There are 3 kind of teams made up of 3 different worlds. The 3 team are Devil, Unown, and Angel. Devil is a team of evil who want to make the world completely evil. Team angel is a team of good which want to make the world completely good and pure. Team Unown is a team with strange pokemon and there goal is to keep the evil and good balanced. Though there is a secret 4th world. Pokemon born in each planet are born with there own destiny. Though some pokemon try to escape the planet and go to a world were all teams can live in peace. Even if its full of Devil, Angel, and Unown they all get along perfectly. The worlds are seperated far away from Earth the planet full of humans. The pokemon assign tiny squads of 3. The leader is the person who made the team in the first place.

Ok heres the main characters. Nick a Totidile from the Devil planet who went to the 4th planet.
Steven a Maril from the Angel planet who went to the 4th planet.
Lily a Eevee from the Unown planet who went to the 4th planet.
Serenes the elder who gives advice to all pokemon he is a wailord in the 4th planet..
Rocky a pelliper who delivers missions for pokemon squads in the 4th planet.

Note: These our just the characters you will hear about most. There are other characters just not as mainish.
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Chapter 1: Im a what?!?!?
-Yawnn- I woke up and looked around. "Geez what am I doing outside? It must be a prank from my brother" I started walking and I fell into some water. "Yup this is definetly my brothers work" I looked down at my reflection and gasped. "I am a totidile!??!?!!" I ran around like crazy. "Hmm if I am a pokemon then lets try a water gun" I focused and a few bubbles came out. "Man a bubblebeam? Oh well" I walked around and was surrounded by a horrible ugly place that was very dark. I tripped over a book titiled the devil world. I looked at it and noticed I was in a place full of pure evil. I noticed it said anyone caught escaping would get caught and never be seen again. I got freaked out. "I don't care if I will never be seen again. This place gives me the creeps I got to get out of here. I saw a pod that looked like it was meant for space. I went inside it. "I wish I didn't sleep through the class on how to operate a space shuttle" I started pressing random buttons and the space shuttle took of. "Destination Special World Targeted" I hoped that world was better then Devil word. In minutes I was at a beautiful place. "Wow this is awesome. In studies I have never heard of such worlds.

Note: I might put the word demon instead of devil for devil world because I have been doing it several times. So what do you think so far?
Note: Oh and since its the beginning it is supposed to be short it will get bigger and more detailed soon.

[Pickle Jar]

Haha... the first part completely rips off that talking pogeymanz show. XD Keep in ficcing.

[Nick]

O.O -Confused- I am not 100% sure what you said. If when you say rip off you like it or when you say rip off you hate it. xD Though since its a Haha i will go with common sense and say you liked it?

[Pickle Jar]

Rawr. I meant to say it rips off the the go-getters, i meant that it's almost exactly like the beggining of it, which is funny. XD Keep On ficcing is what i meant, not keep in ficcing. o.o;

[Nick]

Oh. Well at least I added a few things to do it. Like the different worlds and crap. This is the part that is the copy. -Yawnn- I woke up and looked around. "Geez what am I doing outside? It must be a prank from my brother" I started walking and I fell into some water. "Yup this is definetly my brothers work" I looked down at my reflection and gasped. "I am a totidile!??!?!!" I ran around like crazy. "Hmm if I am a pokemon then lets try a water gun" I focused and a few bubbles came out. "Man a bubblebeam? Oh well"

[Itachi Uchiha]

I love it. keep going please.

[Pickle Jar]

Well yeah, i didn't mean the whole thing was copied, just the beggining. Oh...and bubblebeam is actually stronger than water gun. XD

[Nick]

Lol its weird it makes it look like bubblebeam is weak. xDDDD

[Itachi Uchiha]

yes it does. when do you think you could write more?

[Pickle Jar]

Eh, actually that attack was bubble. XD Oh well. Water Gun looks more powerful anyway...

[ProtomanΩ]

too much like pokemon mystery dungeon. you even ripped of the commercial.

[Nick]

Anthony when you have that picture in your avatar you make me think your that jerk kenta something off blueoctane

[Itachi Uchiha]

I have no avatar, what are you talking about?

[Pickle Jar]

Nick, Kenta isn't a jerk... he's actually one of the nicest people on there... you must've done something to him first. XD He actually backs up his ideas with facts...yeah. Anyway. NEW CHAPTER NOWWWW!!! RAwwwr.

[Nick]

Oh i met spacepope. And i hate kenta its not something he did to me it was what he did to other people. He tells people that there rpg is horrible and it needs work though he doesn't have the nerve to rpg himself. Which makes me mad.
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Chapter 2: Team Saviors formed!

I walked around the place until I saw 2 more space shuttles land. A Eevee and a Maril came out. I walked up to them. "Hi whats your name? Mine is Nick" The Eevee smirked. "My names Lily" The Maril smiled. "My name is Steven" The Eevee walked up to me and Steven. "You are now members of Team Saviors" The Eevee handed me and Steven a badge. "What? What team? I have no clue what your talking about" Steven and Lily looked at me and started to laugh. "Hey im serious" Steven and Lily gave me a serious look. Lily started to explain things. "You must be the only one here who doesn't know about the rescue teams. There are teams of 3 who go on missions to protect and save pokemon" I started to understand it a little. "Ok I understand" I suddenly fell asleep on the floor.

[Pickle Jar]

Ah, this chapter, it's way to short. Also, sorry for the little nitpick, but at the end, the "I suddenly fell asleep on the floor" should be in quotations.

[Nick]

-smacks Pickle- BAD BOY! DONT EVEN CORRECT ME. And besides the first few chapters will always be a little short.

[Pickle Jar]

I'm just trying to help ya out. That's what us reviewers do.

[Itachi Uchiha]

picklejar said:

Ah, this chapter, it's way to short. Also, sorry for the little nitpick, but at the end, the "I suddenly fell asleep on the floor" should be in quotations.

di you mean to put shouldn't?

[Pickle Jar]

Ummmm, yeah. Whooops. X_______X;

[Nick]

OH. Whoops I meant to put it at the end of understand.
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Chapter 3: Team Saviors First Mission. The Ambush of Eaters and Sleepers.
I woke up. "I must of fell asleep. I look around and noticed I was in a cool building. I looked around and saw a nice pool. Some cushions. Berrys and some plants. I looked around and decided to go outside. I bump into a Pelliper who had something in his mouth and on his back. I was curious of what he was doing. "Oh sorry. I'm just curious though what are you carrying" The Pelliper smiled. "My name is Rocky and im the pelliper who carrys all the mail for missions for teams" I was even more curious. "How do we get a mission from you if were on a team?" The pelliper pointed at a sign that kept on showing different missions.
I looked at the missions carefully.
1. Defeat the Munchlaxs and Snorlaxs that have been attacking and stealing food.
2. Save a baby azuril from a cave.
3. Go to a volcano and save a chikorita. PROS ONLY!
I was mad since I couldn't do mission 3. "I guess I will do mission 1" I went to Lily and Steven and talked to them about the mission. They both agreed. We went to a lake with a wailord in it. "What are we doing here?" Lily shushed me and started talking to the wailord. "Serenes were here for the Munchlax and Snorlax mission" The wailord nodded and pointed at a forest. "Thats where you will find the Munchlaxs and Snorlaxs. You must defeat them and get them to stop stealing and attacking our village. Then drive them far away so it doesn't happen again. "RIGHT!" said Lily and Steven at the same time and saluted. "Uh Right!" I saluted then. Lily and Steven started walking in the opposite direction. I got confused and mad. "What are you doing the forest is the other way!" They said that were going to stock up on items. We walked to a store and there was a chansey there. Lily and Steven walked up and asked for some berrys and potions. The chansey handed them and we left. We headed torwards the forest. We saw a Munchlax and Snorlax trying to eat a wurmple. I used a bubble attack on the Munchlax and Snorlax though it barely effected them. The Munchlax threw the Wurmple on the floor and got in a battle position.
Will the Munchlax and Snorlax eat the Wurmple? Will Nick,Steven, and Lily save the day? Will Nick finally become a human again? Find out in the next chapter of Pokemon Yin Yang Wars!
Sneak Peak of Next Chapter: Nick: Ha this is going to be a peice of cake beating these fattys! What they know hyper beam?!? SOMEBODY HELP! STEVEN, LILY WAKE UP!

[Pickle Jar]

Eat a Wurmple? Lmao, good job. XD

[Nick]

rofl. Yeah I had to put something funny in there. Eating a wurmple is sick and funny at the same time.

[Pickle Jar]

I've waiting for something like this to happen in a fanfic... but wouldn't the wurmple poison him from the inside? Unless he got crunched on before being swallowed. XD

[Nick]

-cough- THINK! What would a Munchlaxs and Snorlaxs be doing in a forest. Hint: There are trees and bushes in the forest. If a munchlax and snorlax ate a berry that cures and stops poison then it wouldn't matter.

[Pickle Jar]

Thinking isn't my thing. Mmm... Wurmpleburgers.

[Nick]

Chapter 4: 3 on 100 Team Saviors First Mission might be its Last!
More then a 100 Munchlaxs and Snorlaxs surrounded me. Nick, Lily, and Steven got in a fighting stance. We covered eachothers backs and started to attack. I noticed the wurmple turned into a cocoon and was hidden in a tree. "Thats it!" I used a bubble attack on some Snorlax and Munchlax though it had barely any effect. "This is going to be tough" I sounded very worried. A berry suddenly fell out of a tree into my mouth to bad it was a tomato berry though. My mouth started breathing flames because it was to spicy. "HOT! HOT HOT!!!!!!!!!!! I ran around using ember because of the spicy tomato berry. I was able to make 10 of the Snorlaxs and Munchlaxs faint though the spicyness eventually went away. I got mad that I didn't use it when I had the chance. "10 down 90 to go" Lily used quick speed and was able to take down 10 of the Snorlaxs and Munchlaxs. "20 down 80 to go!" Steven used a power bubblebeam that was way stronger then my bubble attack. 10 Munchlaxs and Snorlaxs fainted. "This isn't working there is still 70 Munchlaxs and Snorlaxs. "What are we supposed to do?" Suddenly the cocoon openned and a beautifly came out. The beautifly put 60 of them to sleep but accidently put Lily and Steven asleep. "Darnit I can take the 60 of them down but I can't do it without the 10 of the Munchlaxs and Snorlaxs attacking me. I also can't take out 10 of those Munchlaxs and Snorlaxs myself. I saw our bag and rushed threw stuff in it. "No revives?" I saw a weird seed. I took a bite of it since I was hungry. I suddenly felt weird. I was running really fast. I went around and made it so the 60 snorlaxs and munchlaxs would stay asleep. I then used a water gun on the Munchlaxs and Snorlaxs they all fainted. "Yes I think I just went up a level" The pokemon started to retreat into a space shuttle.
Were did the pokemon head off to? What happen to the Beautifly? Will Nick ever evolve into a croconaw? And most importantly will Nick every try a wurmple sandwhich? FIND OUT ON THE NEXT CHAPTER!